My debut dark psychological thriller just went live — would love feedback on the blurb/cover/first chapter.

[scrapper9977]

I finally published my first novella and before I start promoting it anywhere, I want to know how it comes across to fresh readers. I’m not asking anyone to buy it. I’m mainly looking for opinions on:

1. The cover – does it look professional and does it fit the genre.
2. The blurb – does it hook you, or does anything feel unclear or weak.
3. The first chapter – is the opening strong enough to keep you reading.

The book is available on Kindle Unlimited, so anyone using KU can preview it easily. Again, I’m mainly here for critique and outside perspectives.

Here is the link :
https://tinyurl.com/22a9uwy9

Thanks to anyone who takes a moment to check it out.

[observer]

1 - The cover looks professional and fits the genre.
2 - The blub could be slightly more clear on what takes place (after reading the first chapter). You hint at something but not enough.
3 - Yes
Hope this helps!

[XxkevozxX]

1- It does,
2-I agree that it could be slightly more clear,
3-Yes

Keep up this work!